I've finished section five, which covers the idea at a high level and the initial design documents, plus a small objections section. Links to section and the figures referred to are below. I also spent some time researching other practice-as-research projects to see if anything jumped out at me in terms of the approach. Fortunately, I seem to be on the right track. All the stories in the Practice as research: Approaches to creative arts enquiry were super interesting and it was great to see some compelling first-person writing, especially from Annette Iggulden and Gaylene Perry. They managed to talk about their projects and themselves without being too trite or sentimental.